CH 1 PAGE 12
5 panels, 2 tiers.
Tier 1: panels 1-2
Tier 2: panel 3, panels 4-5 stacked
1-12.1 Mid shot on Mr. Hawthorn leaning back against the railing and laughing magnanimously. We see Jane from behind, hanging on to his every word.
HAWTHORN: Of course! You know, I've actually shared some of your stories with some of the other teachers in the English department.
1-12.2 Closeup on Mr. Hawthorn smiling gently.
HAWTHORN: You have a gift, Jane.
1-12.3 View from over Mr. Hawthorn's shoulder of Jane blushing harder as she looks away, one hand carding through her hair as the other one clutches the flyer close.
JANE: I-I'm not that talented, Mr. Hawthorn!
HAWTHORN: I'm serious, Jane.
1-12.4 Closeup on Jane looking sheepishly to one side and blushing.
HAWTHORN: You have an exceptional ability to always bring things to a satisfying conclusion.
1-12.5 Closeup on the flyer being almost crushed in Jane's hand.
HAWTHORN: It would be tragic if you never got a chance to explore that more fully.
