Sometimes you try your best and you don't succeed, you know? Sometimes you don't try very hard at all and you also don't succeed.
CH 1 PAGE 17
5 panels, 3 tiers
Tier 1: panel 1
Tier 2: panels 2-4
Tier 3: panel 4
1-17.1 Longshot on Jane sneaking out through the back door and into the alleyway behind the shop. She's looking back through the door with a guilty expression. Establishing shot of the alley.
JANE: Fuck.
1-17.2 Closeup on Jane clicking the door shut behind her and leaning her head back with her eyes closed.
JANE: I meant to finish prepping everything…
1-17.3 Same shot as last panel but now Jane's head is slumped forward, eyes still closed.
JANE: ...I totally forgot that was today.
1-17.4 Jane rubs the back of her head, one eye closed as she looks off to the side. She takes a step forward.
JANE: Oh well.
1-17.5 Wide panel, narrowed down to Jane's eyes as they snap open with lots of dead space around them. Solid red background, wobbly panel borders.