It's important to practice restraint while wielding a meat cleaver. Anyway hey happy new year
CH 1 PAGE 14
4 panels 3 tiers.
Tier 1: panel 1
Tier 2: panel 2-3
Tier 3: panel 4
1-14.1 Establishing shot of the Super Massive Meat butcher shop from an aerial view. Jane is standing at the counter cutting the steak while her Boss stands next to her at the cash register. Jane is wearing a work apron and hat but the boss is wearing a Tommy Bahama shirt. In front of him is a customer that he's chatting with.
BOSS: Today's my day off if you can believe it--I stopped in today anyway to see if my staff here can really do what I tell them to.
CUSTOMER: Ha ha...
1-14.2 Dutch angle shot that serves as an establishing shot for the Boss. Behind him we see a figure starting to carry boxes through the entryway to the hallway.
BOSS: We should be able to get your steak right to you as long as Jane here can focus on doing her job for five minutes.
1-14.3 Eye level mid shot on Jane as she continues trimming the steak; she's looking down at it intently as she does so. Sidled up behind her holding a box is Christian looking smug. In the background we see largely-unintelligible speech balloons of the boss continuing to talk to the customers, the color fading into the wall color. Christian's speech balloon is seated slightly over them, more clearly visible but also smaller and in lower case to denote whispering.
BOSS: You know how it is at a shop like this, you gotta make sure you keep everyone in line.
CHRISTIAN: I told you so.
1-14.4 Wide, short eye level mid shot on Jane in profile from the waist up. She's seated slightly to the left of the page with the background on the right obscured by the sound effects. She looks pissed as hell as she brings the knife down hard just out of panel.
SFX, LARGE: CHOP