4-20.1 Jane glances back over her shoulder at Lan whose hand is still on her shoulder. Lan looks much more serious. Jane is caught off guard. Beyond the balcony the rain has stopped but the sky is still gray. LAN: I'm not going to move out. I finally got my apartment the way I want it and I like how close to my family it is, even if the landlord sucks.
4-20.2 View from outside the balcony again but now sun spots are starting to cut through the gloom. We can see Lan still has her hand on Jane's shoulder. LAN: What I'm trying to say is, I'll have a lot more cash on hand if you ever need any in a pinch. Even if it's not money, I'd like to help.
4-20.3 Closeup on Lan's face looking sympathetic. Behind her we see blue sky starting to peek through the clouds. LAN: I know you've been having a rough time lately and I just wanted to let you know that if you ever need anything you can just ask.
4-20.4 Closeup on Jane looking wide-eyed and blushing furiously, Lan's hand still on her shoulder. JANE: Lan...t-thank you...
