CH 1 PAGE 09
5 panels, 3 tiers.
Tier 1: panels 1-2
Tier 2: panel 3
Tier 3: panel 4-5
1-09.1 Jane smiles up at Nat from where she's sprawled out, arms raised over her head.
JANE: Ha ha!
1-09.2 Our first closeup on Nat's face. Her gaze is trained intensely onto the viewfinder of her camcorder that she's pointing at Jane.
NAT: It could be my big break.
1-09.3 Big panel of Nat kneeling over Jane and filming her. Mid shot, filmed from behind Jane so we see Nat as she towers over Jane and almost leers into her viewfinder. Nat's dialogue is spread out over a series of connected speech balloons.
NAT: An exposé on how awful everyone else is--a film starring Jane Nowak as the average everyman lens through which we'll dissect and deconstruct the evils of this diseased society, directed and filmed by the incredibly talented and thought-provoking Asenath White.
1-09.4 View on Jane from above again, looking put out.
JANE: I don't want to do anything too mean.
1-09.5 Reverse shot on Nat, who is now lowering her camcorder and rolling her eyes dramatically. A voice trails in from off-panel.
NAT: You always pussy out of doing anything fun.
OFF-SCREEN VOICE: Jane?
